
Last summer vacation my family decided to go to Austria and Germany because some of our family was there. We saw that it's better to go and meet them We decided that it's time to go to Germany but on the way my father wanted to stay in a place called Zell am see for a few days. It was like a small village that was surrounded by nature and green mountains. There wasn't any sky high building that's why we all fill in love with the place and was the most beautiful place that we have ever seen. Once we got there we found out that my father had already reserved a suite for us at the grand hotel that was in front of the lake and I was so lucky in having the room with the magical view. At the first night we went to a square that was known with its cafes, restaurants and the live musical shows. The weather was so amazing and refreshing .I went with my cuisines to take a walk by the lake at that time our parents have already planned what we will do in the next day. So after a night of a good sleep my mother woke us up at 9am and shocked us by saying that we are going to a top of a mountain that had snow all over it. We started getting ready and assuring that we all wearing a heavy clothes, so we don't get cold there. After getting out of the hotel and arriving to the mountain. We had to get on a bus to take us to the middle of the mountain and that was the first stage for us to get to the top. It was so scary because it was moving fast around the mountain and there wasn’t any pavement nor fences in case of anything bad happened so we all were at the edge of our seats. We got off the bus station we had to get in to a telyfreek and it's like a small, made of hard glass room with seats and it moves between mountains by ropes so that was a little bit freaky. So we had fun there and I hope go there again.

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Because you wrote such a long blog entry (377 words), I have you 80% even though you had 3 errors.
What a great holiday! I think you did something very special and unusual.